A very few words about your final memo: It was gratifying to see the care and effort you put into simplifying the work of your supervising attorneys. They need not crack a bookbinding or touch their keyboards to find out what authority controls this matter and exactly how the cases apply. Your question presented is a rare and wonderful thing among student writing – it shows the reader the exact legal problem, the question that when answered will tell your boss what the outcome of the case must be. Other sections also got the job done beautifully. Your discussion section shows the reader your reasoning and legal support step-by –step, so the reader can double check your work. Through your use of tight, accurate informative subheadings, your memo communicates organization clear, consistently and completely. Most people forgot the conclusion but you provided one that reminds the reader of the big picture after all the detail of your discussion. There you demonstrated that you can think like a lawyer.
No one in class handed in a better memo than yours.
Daniela, because of your hard work and attention to the demands of each assignment, you’ve earned an A for the semester. I have every confidence in you.
Wanda Raiford, Esq.: Legal Writing Professor - ENC 4930